Post by BlackRose on Dec 21, 2009 23:31:26 GMT -5
i am going to say something here and now before you really get to far. the amount of detail you have used is unnecessary. you do not need to go on and on about what her clothing or skin looks like... and all honest i stopped about half way threw it and skimmed the rest. you really do not need to write so much here.
Her height to her weight is incredibly un-healthy back then being skinny is that you didn't eat she should at least be 112 lbs. i know you want your character to be beautiful use a simile to describe her. but you honestly can not make her that beautiful. it just seems too much in my opinion. and in my opinion supermodel-like isn't very pretty. to me all supermodels look like and un-healthy a bag-of-bones.
and i honestly do not mind that she is a falmer and you may keep her on one condition. you play her only in Skyrim, as they are found no were else but Skyrim. having adapted to the sheer cold the way they have they would not survive long out of Skyrim's freezing temperatures.
please i am not being mean or rude but please fix this. and most importantly know that too much detail can over do it. savy?
Her height to her weight is incredibly un-healthy back then being skinny is that you didn't eat she should at least be 112 lbs. i know you want your character to be beautiful use a simile to describe her. but you honestly can not make her that beautiful. it just seems too much in my opinion. and in my opinion supermodel-like isn't very pretty. to me all supermodels look like and un-healthy a bag-of-bones.
and i honestly do not mind that she is a falmer and you may keep her on one condition. you play her only in Skyrim, as they are found no were else but Skyrim. having adapted to the sheer cold the way they have they would not survive long out of Skyrim's freezing temperatures.
please i am not being mean or rude but please fix this. and most importantly know that too much detail can over do it. savy?